Reviews for Poem from my journal
Confessing-Lies chapter 1 . 6/28/2003
:tear: beautiful. keep it up.

Animagess chapter 1 . 6/25/2003
Some spelling errors and the format got a little jumbled, but this is an amazing poem with some excruciatingly beautiful lines (especially the last three). Infintiely more effective than the teenage wannabe angst that sometimes floats arouns here.

Try seperating the title and *the end* from the main body of the poem in Notepad. That usually does the trick.