Reviews for The Masterpiece
Monev11235 chapter 1 . 4/14/2007
So, uh...

Do you still use your FP account?
from beneath the bell jar chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
tres cute - def reminds me of Shel Silverstein
hiddenpassions chapter 1 . 10/19/2005
oh! this is so cute! i LOVE it! awesome writiing :D
Hana to Yume chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
lol! Nice. ...Not much to say other than that. :
Eternity's Angel of Mercy chapter 1 . 8/28/2005
Very cute... Reminds me of those Shel Silverstein poems I was read when I was little. :)
An-Author-At-Heart chapter 1 . 8/10/2005
LOL, that was cute. Short but sweet. Nice job.
How About Nope chapter 1 . 7/31/2005
That's a cute littlbe bit there, it reminds me a lot of my younger brother. Keep it up. _
Seleana chapter 1 . 7/31/2005
Aw! I think its cute... it reminds me of my kid cousion...

_I usually act like that with my stuff too

Me- *randomly does crap on the Paint program*

My Mom- How beautiful!

Me- O_O...what?
Ebony Stars chapter 1 . 7/27/2005
lol, you are only as clever as people think you are I suppose. great poem, i like the humour and irony.
A B Lewis chapter 1 . 7/25/2005
lol. i find this funny. But it's still pretty good. And no, it's not retarded.
Needa S chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
Hehee...Very nice. Awesome job. Thank ya for the kind review. Keep'em coming.

Needa S.
FrozenKiwi chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
Ha! That IS good! Reflections on modern art... heeheehee.
Whisper on the Lips chapter 1 . 7/23/2005
IT's CHOCLATE AND MACARONI NOODLES! A COLLAGE OF FINGER PAIN AND OLD COMICS! VAN GOUGH MEETS A BIG EXPLOSION! IT'S WOW! IT'S AMAZING!

it's a poem.

was i right? i like this poem, very cute. WRITE ON! (
Maxwell K chapter 1 . 7/23/2005
Very clever and funny! It reminds me alot of the work of shel silverstien, full of humor and classic.
butterflyofhazeleyes chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
I like it! I envy you for your talent of making things rhyme. I definitly have a problem with that. That's why none of my poems rhyme. If they did rhyme they would be dr. suess like. Good Job. Oh, and by the way, thanks for the review!
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