I really enjoyed the first conversation between Loriel and Pendre especially. For some reason, the mention of the Dragons blending into the blouders really struck me as interesting, and I especially like their rough-housing on the rock!

“If you can learn how to do that from a textbook, I will eat it. Cover and all,” Pendre told him.

That is such a classic line. ;)

I really enjoyed this chapter and was almost shocked at the addition of magic to the human world, but very pleased. I like the fact that Katie isn't terribly good at performing magic, making it much more believable than if she could summon whole armies of the undead with a flick of her wrist. I'm seriously disliking Paula here and would rather like to beat her into unconsciousness with a pair of stilettos, but Katie's great, and I can't wait to see more of Pendre in the next chapter, and hopefully some more Dragons will come into the plot. Keep up the good work!

Good thing I had you on my author alert! I very much like the concept of dragons in the modern world as humans. And luckily you didn't go through the usual 75 paragraphs or so about how his legs felt different and there was fuzzy stuff on his head. ::Crickets chirp:: Ah ha, ignore me. I've an eye for cliches. Yeah, so good job! Look forward to more.

I enjoy this. Hearing about an oridinary office building through Pendre's eyes is very lovely. Although what a shame he had such a rotten day and I hope he will have the chance to experience the human world which fascinates him so. Also, Pendre has better manners than his father! Was ratehr rude of him to make that comment in front of the girl.

Awesome story Ironychan _V

Whe! It's really good so far! Keep writing it! PLEASE!

0.0 OOh, very intriguing. I want to read more, so get typing!

Pwetty pwetty pwease? *Imitates Frodo's quite amazing kicked-puppy look*

i so agree with this story. Seemingly nobody cares about the old ways, and so dragons are truly dying out. Keep posting! This is a very interesting article.

Not only does this story sound interesting, it's informative. Okay fine, it's not really all that informative, but I didn't know a German count got killed by one of those things. I can't wait to see more of this story.

Hmm I think I recognize this. Cool you're posting it? I'll await more!

Interesting prologue. I'm looking forward to seeing what this is about.

You write like that and you don't think you can get published? Oh ye of little faith. Your style rocks, I look forward to reading more!