Reviews for Unveil
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 7/15/2003
Beautifully written.

Heart of the Sword
Iameverything chapter 1 . 7/10/2003
Thoughts on life put into perfect words.
Wasted Postage chapter 1 . 7/3/2003
Another simply stunning work! Excellent, excellent job! Simply marvelous!

*AbunaiChikara
PainKiller chapter 1 . 6/26/2003
This was just awesome. I just loved the structure of the poem, with the three lines per stanza. Each line... so full of emotion. I wish I could do that. I just can't say enough about the wording of this poem. Every line is a gem.

My two favorite parts were the second to the last stanza (because it's just so true), and the final line. I'm in such awe of your talent. Keep it up.