|Reviews for What a pity|
| frugale chapter 1 . 12/17/2003
Hey, this is awesome! The "cut" piece is a hugely efficient form to ptu emphasis, and in this case, we feel twice the disappointment, the depression, the failure.
| Kesshi Mashin chapter 1 . 10/29/2003
It's been awhile, neh? _ Quality, as usual. Clever cuts...
| Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 6/27/2003
I found that cute, but it was great how you contrasted the two sides.
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