aw... kinda a sad chapter! Still, it's very good.

Already your story has sucked me in! I'm addicted. I like how you describe the people and characters in the story, I love how the lady at the bar doesn't have the nicest speech ever. It's a little down and gritty, but it makes it that much more realistic.

I like, I like. Good work, I'll be back to read the next chapter when it's posted.