|Reviews for Mirage|
| A Beautiful Nightmare chapter 1 . 2/12/2004
This is so pretty... I like it...
| Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 12/31/2003
It may not make a lot of sense, but I still think it's beautiful!
| orangefreak33 chapter 1 . 10/31/2003
It really makes you think. You have alot of talent, I hope you put it to good use. "wavering utopia" is a wonderful pair of words that describes so much.
| Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 9/21/2003
it makes a lot of sense to my stony mind... this is pretty much how i feel about my life... thanks :D
| cosmo-queen chapter 1 . 9/11/2003
Another excellent piece. This made sense to me, because it's what I always seem to be doing, lol. We all need to escape from reality from time to time. Keep writing :)
| Taa chapter 1 . 8/3/2003
Good word choice! Now, I know there's a form of haiku I couldn't quite remember, apart from the 5-7-5. Is this it?
| teh tarik chapter 1 . 7/27/2003
Amazing usage of words!
| glitterjewele chapter 1 . 7/25/2003
this one completely blew my mind. every time i read it, a new line snags me. the one that got me first and continues to be my favorite of the piece is "believe, you are no dreamer." it seems so contradictory at first glance, but then you read it again and it starts to play tricks on your mind and warp things kinda, which gives the piece a great many layers to plunder and investigate. the words themselves are beautiful ~ "adrift mind," "indulge the tang," "wavering utopia" . . . they have a sort of mystical and clear ring to them ~ it's almost as if they're mirages in and of themselves. *ehem* but yes, "believe, you are no dreamer," holds as the favorite, i could be hopelessly entranced with it forever, i swear. true brilliance, that one is. GORGEOUS piece, i like it a LOT. awesome work, as always. kudos!
| C.K. Sarvis chapter 1 . 7/20/2003
It dosen't make sense to me, but It still made me feel at ease. Like a breath of fresh air. thanks I needed that. um, you have, I mean have to review my poems... oh and read them, too... I guess... it's optional.
-Now refreshed Rage
| Plato's Optic Runaway chapter 1 . 7/17/2003
eh, it makes some sense...but poetry, i think, is meant to perplex the reader. and in my case, the author as well. XD very pretty. and inspiring.
| Just Another Face chapter 1 . 7/12/2003
It made sense to me . I liked the last nice job .;
| hoellenwauwau chapter 1 . 7/10/2003
Well it does make sense, in a strange way. It's just very confusing and I don't think I can put down in words what I head in mind, when I read it...I'm not even sure if it makes sense anymore...anyway, great poem!
| Mime chapter 1 . 7/8/2003
My flute teacher was telling me about impresionist music the other day, and how it can relate to other branches of art. I think this piece is one of the "branches" she was talking about. Great job!
| not sure yet chapter 1 . 7/5/2003
hehehehe, muchly like this, esp the last line, has a good affect on the rest of the poem i think, anywayz, muchly enjoyed, excellent job
| lostlainien chapter 1 . 7/5/2003
I like this, it's really peaceful and calming. - The fact that it is not blunt makes it all the more powerful. Good work!