|Reviews for cold|
| Shadafakup chapter 1 . 7/12/2003
This is certainly a very good piece.. I liked it lots.. Painfully written but it speaks the absolute truth.. Good really.. The descriptions used here is fantastic.. I loved the piece.. Very interestin and thought provoking.. I liked the last stanza best out of three.. Good job!
| broken wings241 chapter 1 . 7/5/2003
May I make this a song and then make it my anthem?
Yes, the world is freezing... and no one cares. It might sound stupid (me being so young and all), but nobody loves me either.
(Ahem, everyone tells me I got a whole life to live yet, unfortunately for me I caught middle-aged-single-woman syndrome really early)
Anyway, I seriously loved this... especially the bit about the warm jacket. That was poetic genius as well as wordly truth.