|Reviews for Where dreams come to die|
| cosmo-queen chapter 1 . 8/7/2003
This is so sad. The simplistic style of the poem makes it very powerful and conveys the message across very strongly. Beautiful, keep writing :)
| DefianceIsMe chapter 1 . 6/27/2003
I love the title and the way you used it in the poem. How sad...
| recalcitrant chapter 1 . 6/27/2003
hey thats wicked good. Read my stuff if you want but if u do please review it and let me know what you think. you might like them cuz most of my poems are about love n stuff. peace ..:recalcitrant:..
| Silence-endlessecho chapter 1 . 6/27/2003
I love the line breaks and the entire feeling of this poem. I think it has a beautiful melody to it. I'm putting it on my favorites.
| Kenske chapter 1 . 6/27/2003
Mellow...I like that feeling _. This poem just works out very well! I can't think of anything that I would change, except in the second stanza where you use "I lie Crying" and "all the lying". the sound "lie" is being used a tad too much, but that's just me. Maybe "I stand crying" instead" I dunno, it's just what I think. Good poem! Keep on at it!