Your wonderful! i can see exactly what you are saying! Just wonderful! You have talnet talent talent!

Wow. The imagery on this poem was excellent. I picture so clearly all the things you wrote, and it's amazing. My favorite verse is the second one, line one:

And I don't breathe the same air as you; I can't feel the things you do.

That's truly amazing, and the downright truth. One of the things I think I like best about your poetry is the fact that you are so blunt about it, no beating around the bush, and yet your imagery is so precise, and so amazing, that you can just see it all.

your work is really good, it has a lovely musical (does that make any sense?) quality to it. this is another really good one.

Oh man, stop talking about me! It's like you /wrote/ this poem for me! Freaky...

-xx- Phercraban