Amazing! Beautiful and infinately enchanting!

Interesting. I could very well picture this. It's like someone being led to the chopping block, their hands tied behind their back, and trying to cry for salvation. And you could see the metaphors behind it, as well. You can see the deceit in your everday life, and it makes you think of this poem, and how eventually you'll pay. Very good ideas, and well formed, no matter that it's short. I appreciated your review! Thank you for your comments.

Satan's Tears

oh my gosh! wow! you're so amazing! i've felt like that before... just wow, that was beautiful!

this is beautiful, the rhyming's excellent

i dont know what to say. everything i think of sounds corny so ill leave it at this. thats wonderful. i just hope you didnt write that from experience.