Super funny. I'm impressed.

honestly, methinks u need a life. J/K! please dont kill me...lol. besides, if it makes u feel any better, i KNOW i do! ermm...yea...hmm...fictionpress certainly has quite the selection off very odd ficcys. i thin i have read a lot of them over my winter vaca, too many, i think my brain has been twisted inside out. hey urs is actually pretty lame compared to some others, but funny...mucho funny. erm...beaucoup i should prolly say, seeings as im in french but stupidly always missing FRENCH PRACTICES (*cough cough*)!u havent updated this...still...which is odd considering its the one ur supposedly still working on. i have an idea for a ficcy! scrap sagacious (how boring and cliche!) i have a VERY VERY VERY un-cliche idea *grins evilly* *grins VERY evilly* *evil grin takes over whole entire face* mwahahahaha!

Care to review Shiloh at any point in time, deary?

u know this reminds me of this funny song that my dad had been listening to one time, and its sung by this crazy person who is insane and all depressed because the "love of his life" showed him no respect and left him, and in the last verse u find out that it is a dog he is talking about, and then the chorus is "they're coming to take me away haha! they're coming to take me away heehee haha to the funny farm where life is beautiful all the time and ill be happy to see those nice young men in their clean white coats and there coming to take me away hahaha!"

seriously, that is a real song. i recommend listening to it. its very amusing...lol

i am getting slightly hungry reading ur ficcy

LOL! that was mad hilarity and a half! update, update now! and among the crows (u have a lot of writing to do!) and please put devin in another ! please! _

and i really have to update shiloh, badly. and...heh...really nice last review u gave me...altho ill have to answer no to the question. _ maybe...maybe just for fun tho ill keep andrew in his current sate, yea, bart can be his bud. bart with the green mohawk who collects hot wheels. wow...

HOLY SHIT THAT WAS HILARIOUS!I was laughing my ass off. (please excuse my profanity! .~)Truly a masterpiece! (is it "i" before "e"?...)'Twas REAALY whats strange is, my friend Lupe and I were just talking about chalupas..and pet rocks...sadly, I'm not joking-we really are that dumb. . Well, good story! Excuse me, what I meant to say is "Great Story!" hehe I'm such a dork...kk thats all.~BM .

O my gosh thats HALLAIROUS...whut was ur inspiration 4 that story. LOL

This is hilarios! I where did you get such a good idea.

lol! its cute, i like it -

This is cute. I myself am quite a fan of Taco Bell and this is making want to go there and get myself a chalupa. This is very original, I can't remember the last time I read a story about someone who had a pet Chalupa, mainly because I never have. I can relate to this story by both because I love Taco Bell and I too have 2L2M disease. One comment I have is that there isn't a whole lot of description, unless that is what you were going for. Otherwise, it's really good.

In answer to the question you had about my story, Dear Claudia, Ash simply assumes that her name is spelled with a Y because he has never heard of it being spelled differently.

Hey my old school chum! I really enjoyed the first chapter of this story. Ah, I remember the good old days when I would walk my pita, Santanas, (Devil in spanish) around the park. Good luck with your next few chapters, and I can't wait to read them. Love, Becca-Bear

lol, how did you even THINK of this story? its very cute and clever, do continue.