|Reviews for Ace of Hearts|
| Ederra chapter 2 . 1/26/2010
Hey, you've got a great plot on your hands. Although, I don't know if you've realised, you didn't put in any quotation marks in chap 2... I have to say, it got annoying towards the end because it was hard - well not hard but annoying, to figure out what they're saying and what they're not saying...
Oh! And another thing... I think, if you were to put ANs at the end of a chapter, maybe skip a line or put dashes between the AN and the story, it helps by differentiating the two.
Sorry if my comments sound cynical or picky, I don't mean it to be that way...
| Riley Hunter chapter 2 . 11/19/2007
HAHAHAHAH! Can't wait for the next chapter!
| 0.0 NightRiders 0.0 chapter 2 . 8/1/2007
Amazing. I urge you to keep on going. Plz. for my health anyway :P. (NOT an insult)
| Glow100 chapter 2 . 12/27/2006
Hey gd chapter it seems like thers going to be a gd twist in it :)neway cant wait for da next chapter bye
| emi623 chapter 2 . 8/11/2006
Nevermind- I change my mind about Vierge- I think her personality is greatly suited. . .hehe. Sorry. I do hope you update. . .but wow- the last time was three years ago. . .that's. . .far. . .hehe. I hope you get our reviews!
| emi623 chapter 1 . 8/11/2006
That was brilliant! Well, I meant the whole story plot- you have everything there in the first chapter to spark off something great. . .Only, i wish Vierge wouldn't cuss that much or something? I don't know. . . .Oh well. I'm not really getting her personality yet. But continue!
| Sparkle chapter 2 . 7/29/2006
Awesome! can't wait for ur nex update!
| abc123 chewy chapter 2 . 1/14/2006
awesome! cna't wait for an update
| Dirty Secret chapter 2 . 12/15/2005
Woah, very interesting story...UPDATE SOON! (Although you haven't updated for...two...years...
| Amethyst-Heart chapter 2 . 10/10/2005
This story is awesome. I really hope you update this (and "I Dare You") sometime soon. Great job, good luck, and I await your next installment.
| sketchingaCYNiC chapter 2 . 9/7/2005
GASPTEARTEARTEARSOBGASP WHY ARE YOU NOT CONTINUING THE STORY? *tear* i need tissues. this is such an awesome fic. *blows nose* give these to your muse. your muse is a BUTTHEAD. RAWR.
| Alyssa chapter 2 . 8/10/2005
I'm seriously loving this! I hope you get inspired, because I need a third chapter.
| guitar songstress chapter 2 . 7/28/2005
This is good! I'm enjoying every minute of it! It's going on the alert list, so you'd better update soon!
| DeliciousAmbiguity chapter 2 . 6/8/2005
Noo. You haven't updated for YEARS! This fic is great, you shouldn't just drop it! I'd be so sad. So you must continue soon!
| Grape chapter 2 . 5/20/2005
This is really good! I like the idea that you have going on here. I hope that the next chapter comes soon.