I really like this! it sounds like an AWSOME start for a story and i WANT MORE! this is already really interesting AND what is even cooler isthatthis came from a dream that you had! Don't you just LOVE it when you have a dream that wonderful that you want to write about? hee...

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:DI have to say, awesome dream, no? This was very good, well-writen and everything. Will there be more? Great story!~Mlle. Daae

wow amazing how vivid your dreams are! by the way keep writing vampire lover!

Well, I can't say that I haven't had realistic dreams, but I can say I wish they were like yours. :)

You should try to continue this. It's very good.

Dreams are for a reason. Everything in your dream you remember clearly, especially Jeff, is probably a symbol of something in your waking life. You should compare and see what you figure out. I did a report on dreams once and it just fascinated me, so I thought I'd give you my input. I love solving dreams for people! Hope you figure something out! :)

Gorgeous! you could always spin it into a tale later!

i know it's only a one shot but i think you could go places with it, and should go places with it. it's a good begining to any story, you know? add in a chapter about her background, how she came to be at the shop then just go w/ it... or you could just leave it and let us all wonder. lol. it's cool though.

I dont care that it was a dream just KEEP IT GOING! I love it, props to you.

hey,

another good beginnin. i like. you should continue with the chapters:)