Awww!

OHMYGOSH THAT WAS SO CUTE!

they already act like an old married couple lol!

I love it!

I loved it! Great story.

I know you prolly finished this story a while ago, but I figured I would point something out that is really bugging me.

A) There are lots of grammar and spelling mistakes. Little things, but they are slightly confusing.

B) Sometimes you can't tell who is talking, or who is doing what. Again, it's confusing.

C) You said in this chapter that Mac is a month old, and that the project has been going on for 4 weeks. The problem with that is, Mac wouldn't have been weaned from his mom at a few days old. In order to have their eyes open and weaned and such, the puppies and kittens would have had to have been at least 8 weeks old when the project started, so they would be more around 3 months at the minimum if the project was 4 weeks along.

Nice romantic ending :) Although the end was somewhat rushed.

i STILL love this story! i could just read it over and over again and never get sick of it .. great job!

Hard-won victory, but a victory nontheless. It's still sad though. To loose 10 years like that. I know it happens in the real world, and it just breaks my heart...you know.

the ending was okay but the stary was awesome

i love how you put them back together

they were meant to be

and i hate chris :D

lawl

kutgw

youre awesome

ciao

Sam

Oh, for sure that was a very sweet ending. ]

you know, this is my second or third time reading this fic but it's kind of like a good book that you just keep coming back to

besides the occasional hiccup for spelling errors (new and knew; now and know, little things)

but i think, reading some of your more recent stuff, that that's basically disappeared

you have such a great balance of plot, character, charisma, and the obvious associations that come with f/f's that it's rather impressive to read

you're very pleasing to read, i must say

Apparently Fictionpress doesn't allow me to post links *lol, an't that a big surprise now?* so...er...just google it )

*laughs* I don't know if you'll be able to see this review or not ) but *laughs again* if you want a better ending. xD the newest research of stem cells showed that it was possible for women to produce sperm ) so, meaning, now lesbians are able to have children of their own *or you can look at this as cloning, because its possible for one person to have a child* (Note: This research is still at its early stages, but seeing your story takes place in the far future, it mean, by the time that "time" comes, this will actually be real~) is the link for it xD

as for the story! *laughs*

ITS WONDERFUL! but the evan part KILLED IT O but, well, it was fair ) and whatnot! its' a great story! i hope to be able to read more f/f works of yours ) I liked this idea A LOT, because its REFRESHING! a family project brining a young couple together for life ) so cute, and perfect ending )

So I love this story so much. And this is the second time I've read it... Yep. I just love who the whole, them falling in love process, is believable.