|Reviews for I Miss|
| Artemis Anderson chapter 1 . 10/11/2007
I like how the last line sums it all up in 3 short but powerful words. d:) Great job!
| horsegal-98 chapter 1 . 5/6/2004
I loved this. It's beautiful.
| Celtic Moon chapter 1 . 3/5/2004
first things. thanks so much for the reviews. they flatter me. thanks alot. heehee, im giddy. can you tell. this poem spoke to me, b cuz, there's some one close to me, that i miss very much. nice job. i love love poems. heehee
| Kymmie chapter 1 . 12/10/2003
| waterbaby chapter 1 . 12/7/2003
touching...goes straight to the heart. great job.
| Jrock1 chapter 1 . 11/28/2003
Aw thats the sweetest thing in the world.
| Tempered Soul chapter 1 . 9/5/2003
can't describe it
| ArisaKatsu chapter 1 . 8/22/2003
That was lovely. I really liked how you used the senses. You are very talented. Great descriptions.
| InkedinSin chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
the poem would be perfect...but 3d stanza is in awkward postion, kind of hard to read, but it's a good poem.
| Starlit Rogue chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
| wild Pennyroyal chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
This has got to be my favourite poem so far! I really really REALY love how you use the five senses in each stanza.
My favourite is the last stanza, because it's so beautiful, especially the last two lines.
The only suggestion I have is grammatical, and all that is, is maybe just use some more commas. If you want, I could help you, but it's just an opinion, and it might be your style that you don't use punctuation.
| Mbwun chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
Very sad. Sorry this review sucks:)
~He Who Walks On All Fours
| Incubabe chapter 1 . 7/26/2003
Aw - this is so sweet.
I love the whole rhythm of the poem and each stanza begins the same way - really well-written!
| Steph chapter 1 . 6/29/2003
Wow that's really lovely...
| alix camille chapter 1 . 6/28/2003
So sad, but beautiful. Great poem, and thanks for reviewing mine. :D