Reviews for I Miss
Artemis Anderson chapter 1 . 10/11/2007
I like how the last line sums it all up in 3 short but powerful words. d:) Great job!
horsegal-98 chapter 1 . 5/6/2004
I loved this. It's beautiful.
Celtic Moon chapter 1 . 3/5/2004
first things. thanks so much for the reviews. they flatter me. thanks alot. heehee, im giddy. can you tell. this poem spoke to me, b cuz, there's some one close to me, that i miss very much. nice job. i love love poems. heehee
Kymmie chapter 1 . 12/10/2003
absolutely beatiuful!
waterbaby chapter 1 . 12/7/2003
touching...goes straight to the heart. great job.
Jrock1 chapter 1 . 11/28/2003
Aw thats the sweetest thing in the world.
Tempered Soul chapter 1 . 9/5/2003
so moving

can't describe it
ArisaKatsu chapter 1 . 8/22/2003
That was lovely. I really liked how you used the senses. You are very talented. Great descriptions.
InkedinSin chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
the poem would be perfect...but 3d stanza is in awkward postion, kind of hard to read, but it's a good poem.
Starlit Rogue chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
Nice poem.
wild Pennyroyal chapter 1 . 8/18/2003

This has got to be my favourite poem so far! I really really REALY love how you use the five senses in each stanza.

My favourite is the last stanza, because it's so beautiful, especially the last two lines.

*applauds* Wonderful!

The only suggestion I have is grammatical, and all that is, is maybe just use some more commas. If you want, I could help you, but it's just an opinion, and it might be your style that you don't use punctuation.
Mbwun chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
Very sad. Sorry this review sucks:)

~He Who Walks On All Fours
Incubabe chapter 1 . 7/26/2003
Aw - this is so sweet.

I love the whole rhythm of the poem and each stanza begins the same way - really well-written!


Diana x
Steph chapter 1 . 6/29/2003
Wow that's really lovely...
alix camille chapter 1 . 6/28/2003
So sad, but beautiful. Great poem, and thanks for reviewing mine. :D