Reviews for The Angel
Velvet Valentine chapter 1 . 1/5/2004
This one made me think...I really like it. It's beautiful and so short. It's amazing how you can do that with so few words...
waterbaby chapter 1 . 12/7/2003
its amazing how, with so few words, you can touch a persons heart
Dirty Wallpaper chapter 1 . 9/16/2003
oh, that was beautiful, and the way you put took me a few seconds to really really grasp the meaning, but once i did i was speechless, great great work, kudos.
Starlit Rogue chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
Nice poem.
wild Pennyroyal chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
Sad. Very, very, sad. *sniff*

But it also contains a hint of..well, not hope, but something akin to it. Really nice, and I like the twist in the end.
Mbwun chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
This is probably my favorite thus far... very simple, very emotional (very sad). Very good job.

~He Who Walks On All Fours
Ultimate Schuyler chapter 1 . 7/26/2003
Translation: Someone who was good to you in your life passed on? I think? It was a nice haiku.
Stoffpferd chapter 1 . 7/10/2003
Oh wow, very meaningful. The last line was amazing...good job!

Steph chapter 1 . 6/29/2003
that is a sweet poem:)
Psycho-kyugurl chapter 1 . 6/28/2003
Aww...that's beautiful.

P.S. Read your profile, I gotto agree no one writes like JRR Tolkien himself but I must say, Harry Potter really had a cutting-edge that somehow inspired me.