|Reviews for To Be Dead|
| jgjqeoi8jg23jfoiwjf0q9f chapter 1 . 5/2/2005
| AnnaSun chapter 1 . 9/17/2003
It was a bit voilent but I liked it anyway. I am gald you enjoy my poems. I'll post some more soon :)
Thanks for sharing :)
| shiniwa chapter 1 . 7/2/2003
"Mine for the taking and mine for the breaking"
I love that line. It adds a lot of power in the earlier part of the poem, and starts a nice roll of momentum, which begins turning it from a work of teen angst to one of brilliant sadism.
Aside from that, I still liked the poem. Good flow for a work of freeform, some good poetic devices, and it tickled my sadistic fetishes. I applaud you.
| not sure yet chapter 1 . 7/2/2003
wow, powerful, amazing imagery and intense emotion, i personally love it, very well written with a good flow, and full of suppressed anger but more of a broken soul, heart, and mind, its sick yet very understandable in a weird twisted way, muchly enjoyed this one, excellent job
| Jimmy Jazz chapter 1 . 6/28/2003
DUDE! This was fantastic. I love every word of it, BRILLIANT JOB!
| Frodo chapter 1 . 6/28/2003
Woah... this is as creepy as it gets. It's really weird, but I have to admit, I like it.