Reviews for The Gray Area
GirlMaverick chapter 1 . 5/26/2004
This reveiw is actually a review on your bio but it won't let me do that so I'll pt it here instead. I HATE CHEESECAKE! EW! The fact that you like it is just further evidence of your insanity.
blackblade2 chapter 2 . 12/5/2003
(Couldn't submit a second review logged in.)
Anyway, hey Ravioli, it's Ace...I tried to e-mail you, but your address isn't working. Are you sure you put up the right one? My e-mail (which has changed) is now , so if you get an e-mail from there...that's me! I've gotta go now, I'll talk to you later...(update! *hint hint*)
blackblade2 chapter 2 . 7/29/2003
Uh oh...she is insane? Or is this just meant to confuse the dear reader, haha?

The whole thing with Kaori was very cute. Sorry if I misspelled that, I actually read this chappy last week and didn't get a chance to review until now...

I like the conversations between your voices. Very interesting...
Amizannie chapter 1 . 7/26/2003
well UG i know ur a good writer or something but i havn't read it. sry Rocky i know u assume ppl read ur story before reviewing it but its probably good since i rememeber that other book u have writtin. it was like C some (i think it was like Ca?) but it was good. so whatever. well im goin over S Doggs' bachelor pad to clean and stuff. so i'll talk to ya later Rocky. ADIOS!

(*i just relized this had nothing to do with ur story!)

-Amizannie
blackblade2 chapter 1 . 7/21/2003
Hi Ravioli! This story's cool so far. I can't wait to read more, so I'm not going to leave a long review. Just one thing: watch for run-on sentences. Other than that...I really like Yashi! I wanna know who he is...so I guess I shall read and find out...
kastor chapter 2 . 7/5/2003
i said it was like x-men2 because of this secret "home" for mutants. and i was right with dilly.., and i really look forward to more of it. to the chapters: I would prefer shorter ones, coz that makes reading them easier and cheaper.

my confusion comes from not knowing so much english... so, til next time, ill read it.
AethraZip chapter 2 . 7/2/2003
MEEP! *restrains urge to glomp Unity Girl*

*Ahem* Anywho . . . nice! Most mutant stories are about people like the X-Men, it's nice to see one about *normal* (take that how you want) kids. BTW . . . cheesecake for update, yes?
Eiji Tunsinagi chapter 2 . 7/2/2003
Well, things get more interesting as the plot thickens and new characters arrive... Update soon!

~Eiji Tunsinagi
Ices1004 chapter 2 . 7/1/2003
Pretty good story, little on the confusing side but who cares? Please update soon. This is pretty good. I like the 'Not The End' thing.
AethraZip chapter 1 . 6/29/2003
Hmm . . . well, thats certainly different . . .

A fellow cheesecake fan? *glomp* I LUFF CHEESECAKE! CHEESECAKE DAISUKE DESU YO!

*ahem* Well, anyway, if you get a chance, please read my manga. It's not real great, but I want reviews . . . (AethraZip is a greedy bitch, that she is)
Eiji Tunsinagi chapter 1 . 6/28/2003
This story is very different from the others I've read (different in a GOOD way) and I'm waiting for you to update it. I find the characters and the situation they're in very interesting. But I do have a question: Why is Dillon so evil sounding? Does he have an evil plan or something? I'd like to know. Put up the rest!

And oh yeah: Review my stories too! That'd be great.

I'm expecting the next chapter of your story soon, so please dont leave me with the cliffhanger!

~Eiji Tunsinagi
kastor chapter 1 . 6/28/2003
fduck, the first story i read her, and itS a damn cliffhanger...

so by now i think the person who grabs from behind is *dilly*(IM an escaflowne fan and on ff net there is this special character, you might know it)

some things in the plot remind me of x -men 2 but hey, it doesn? T matter, iM confused and i want to read more...