Reviews for Break Away
joie 610 chapter 1 . 8/4/2003
SCORE! lol jk ;) woo, nice work. cool poem with definitely a twist at the end. good job! and i think i've reviewed all your poems- yay! they were all good &D keep it up!
lainxauber chapter 1 . 7/2/2003
That ending was unexpected. Keep writing, you're good.
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 6/30/2003
kool~ A question: why am i ALWAYS sugar high when readin' ur fics?... * gets run over by a car*


Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 6/29/2003
That was a cool twist at the end.

~Heart of the Sword
not sure yet chapter 1 . 6/28/2003
lmao, very cute, love the imagery in the begining and then the turn around at the end, muchly enjoyed this, awesome job