Reviews for Things Change, But Not Everything |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this story is absolutely adorable! I love how the two can be immature when they're alone together! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was cute but really cliched. It got a bit boring near the end but overall, it was good. Nice job :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, this seems like a scene right out of a movie! I mean that as a compliment, LOL :P You did a creating the moment. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it!Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol nice xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() AGH! so short but cute and great. its cliche and its great. its mushy and its great. love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought this was a good story, i liked how you incorporated the past into the present, they were good transitions. however, i thought your ending was quite abrupt, she just lost her father, and from what i was reading, it didn't seem like she was in mourning or grieving. Maybe elaborate a little more on that. other than that, its not much. although sometimes, you tend to have quite cliched descriptions. like in the prologue where you compared the scenery of the water to a painting. its good occasionally, but it gets cheesy sometimes. anyway, keep on writing and improving, joey |
![]() ![]() ![]() THIS IS STORY IS OS FREAKIN AWEOSOME! (I HOPE I SPELLED THAT RITE ])IT SGOING OT MY FAVORITES! ] LOVE IT! LOVE UR WRITEING TOO! D |
![]() ![]() hey, i'm not sure if you go back and read these reviews; i see that you finished this story a long while back, but i loved it. i just wanted to let ya know! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really love this story.. i was hoping it was longer than that though.. sucks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was such a sweet story! |
![]() ![]() OMG! That was so beautiful! V |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow...awesome story. I'm sure that it was a bit...well, simple and that's what's keeping it away from being a masterpiece, but it's still good. Had you made it more complicated, who knows. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww.. :] i love it love it love it! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw that is a beautiful story. cya later. |