Reviews for Egglety The metamorphosis |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, this was pretty cute! :-D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() well, this certainly is interesting. umm... yeah. _ but what happened to that stirfry one you were thinking about writing? -Krys |
![]() ![]() ![]() Have you ever read or seen the play "The Futrue is in Eggs"? If not, I think you'd like it. It reminds me alot of this story, esp. the French Revolution part. Anyway, I really like this story. Normaly you get all the fables about the eggs breaksing, I don't think I've actually read one when the egg turns into a chick. Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's very - odd - but truthful. A new beginning usually is the result of a very abrupt ending, like your shell cracking (if your an egg). |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's interesting to think that eggs can have such deep thoughts before they hatch but this is indeed an interesting if not slightly odd story. lol!~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I still love your writing! I love how you make stories out of the simplest things...eggs! Keep writing |