wow...very good. I like how you put your feelings out there...hope everything works out

Hey, very good poem. Coming from someone who knows a heartbreak from experience. The one discrepancy (sp?) I found was "Because no one else could ever try To take away this love of mine" Good lines but the only couplet that didn't rhyme. It kind of made the flow, that was quite nice by the way, falter towards the end.

Awwe! That was sweet! really good writing! keep it up!