i know.
write more on this subject! i love what you have so far, but if you lengthened it, it could be a worthwhile peice of analysis. good work, keep writing

I don't know if you intended this to be offensive, but I found it very much so. Suicide is not a subject you should be flippant about. I'm a little sensitive about the issue since a friend of mine killed herself a few months ago due to mental illness.

Well I liked the first paragraph!

YES! Lemmings! I recall sometime in the 4th grade I read a book about them. I recall my horror as I wondered why they'd through themselves off cliffs. Thanks for the enlightenment! I'm now compelled to write my own essays.

Continue writing! Your works are VERY intriguing.

-Cindy Moon *)

A good point, but lemmings don't intentionally throw themselves off cliffs. They're just trying to find someplace that has enough food for all of them, and if they fall over a cliff...too bad for them.

a very good point. hehe, lemmings!