Reviews for Blue Veiled Eyes
SleepDontWeep chapter 1 . 8/4/2004
thats really sad! its really realistic and eerie! peoples eyes r very powerful they can b seductive and deceptive and cunning and make a person seem flawless! ok im babbling so ill shut up! just well done and keep writing!
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Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 7/15/2003
You really described how it feels.

Heart of the Sword
Wasted Postage chapter 1 . 7/3/2003
O! This was another simply marvelous work! In every aspect of the word! Brilliant, plain and simple! I love your style of writing, and all of your works, you are on my favorites list!

*AbunaiChikara
PainKiller chapter 1 . 6/29/2003
Another amazing poem... you've got me in awe once again of your talents. The first line of the final stanza was just fantastic. Incredible. Keep writing.
Frodo chapter 1 . 6/29/2003
Awesome. Yeah, I would imagine this is how it feels after a breakup. Nice work.

-Frodo
aik0h chapter 1 . 6/29/2003
sad...but a good poem1! :D keep it up

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