The length of this chapter kind of annoyed me. Not that it was horrible, but I was expecting it to be a little longer. This was a good place to stop, I will admit that, but I wanted to keep reading.

I will make something clear right now. I don't always review every chapter to stories. If htey are good enough, i usually go four to six chapters till I review. This is not meant as offensive, but that's how I usually work.

Check out my stories if you like. I only write yaoi myself.

Alex dark

This was actually pretty good. While it's in a style of writing I am not used to seeing, it was still good. I haven't read many stories written in first person like that; you did a good job with it.

Have you finished this story yet? If you need a beta or someone to give you ideas or something I can help.

Looking forward to reading more,

Alex dark

LOL. Tenshi is hilarious! who would've thought and though you explain why the characters do what they do I think their personalities jump a little so you can have them do what you want. :) I like Li. the club scene was pretty cool too.

:) I like it. A little crazy, but in a good way. :) yeah for you.

Just wondering where Kazoul went in the rest of the story. It seemed like they had become friends but I don't think he came back.

*jumps for joy* Yay for lemons!

Anywho I kinda find the headers and footers just as interesting as the story. don't ever change that.

i give you extra stars for being so skillfull at catching my attention! you have major problems with the tense. I get the feeling that you wrote this very fast, and didn't bother to take a second look at it at all. your plot is good, so please re-read what you've written and correct the mistakes. mistakes scare readers away. and *does the advertisement dance* review my fics too! _

Oh My God, my heart simply melted. i cant wait for the sequel!

Wow, that was really wonderful to read. I'm a Yaoi freak and am very happy to find Yaoi of this quailty. Very good. Very wonderful

This is not a crappy ending. It was sweet. (gods my inner-hopeless romantic is taking over. 3 words. *deadpanned* death. by. fluff.) I love this story. I just found it by the way otherwise I would have reviewed the other chapters. Methinks I'll add this to my favorites. Ya know this story is compulsively readable. I think I'll read it again. Expect another review in a few days.

hey, just wanna say this fic is one of my fav

this is a really good story...nice ending...love your characters...;P

::claps with tears in her eyes:: OMGravitation! That was one of the best ficcies that I've ever read! And it wasn't short either and it's complete! (shame that I haven't read it sooner ne? -.-;;) The part where Tenshi cut his hair for Yuiko brought tears to my eyes, and that's not all. I was crying my eyes out for about 10-15 minutes! ::starts to cry remebering what happened:: But dang, underneith the table at a reception at a wedding? Pretty bold move. ::lol:: The old lady crack me up tho ne? Saa saa, I guess what I'm trying to say is that over all, your fic so so completely freaking awsome ne? Tottem sugoi! Ano, gomen nasai, demo I have to go now. Keep up the good work ne? ja ne na!~Hoshi

Wow! I've been working my way through this story for a month (you know, school and crap in the way), and I just wanted to say, that it was super. I loved every bit of it, all your wonderful descriptive ability, and you just have to love the bunny boy Tenshi. It was wonderful how you gave him real character (all the characters had it), especially with the hosipital, and the young boy. Great job! I loved reading it. :)

OMG ! I'm SO sorry for not reviewing in like a million years, I'll tell ya', I know you don't write fanfics, DON'T START! They're addictive like drugs! I've practically been living in the Naruto section of forever now! Curiousy I returned to this site to see you had finished FSRFDMTS, and with such a good ending too. I loved it. The poem, omg I almost cried a river, it's been so long since I read about perverted Li and cute little Tenshi that I almost forgot about them. ALMOST! Never! BUWHAHA This was a damn good fic, and I will SO try to stay over at fictionpress from now on, tho... ... is... so tempting... *dies* Anyway, please continue writing and hurry up with the sequel (this coming from the chick who promised another Street Trash *sweatdrop*) Oh and omg thanks SO much for recommending me to people at the beginning of this chapter *teardrops* I was so happy people remembered me even after I abandoned them so evily for the charms of , anyway, thanks! *huggles* please write more I love your stuff more than cherry pie, and I LOVE cherry pie .

This story is so lovely. Usually I like minor characters better than main characters, but I really loved Li and Tenshi. I loved everything about your story. And I thought the end was sweet and heart warming. Even the message at the end was still cute. *huggles* Now I just have to read all of your stories now.