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Prisoner-11 chapter 11 . 4/18/2006
I forgot to put this in my chpt 12 review, in chpt 10 it says, "It did, God Billy your beautiful, I just… I’m not the one you want – I’m only going to hurt you.”

“No your not!” "

Okay, now I notice you do this a lot, you use your/you're wrong. 'Your' is a possesive term, and you're using it like 'you're'. 'You're' stands for 'you are' it's not possesive like your.

Ex: "This is your apple" and "You're (you are) great"So the above sentances should be: "...God Billy YOU'RE beautiful...I’m only going to hurt you.”

“No YOU'RE not!”

I really like this story by the way, otherwise I wouldn't be reviewing
Prisoner-11 chapter 12 . 4/18/2006
Coolio story.
EmptyNight chapter 12 . 10/17/2004
The Bloody Rose chapter 12 . 8/18/2004
OMG! I ADORE your story! Please keep going with it! It is one of the best ones i've ever read! You write beautifully! Keep up with the good work!
Spawn of Hell chapter 12 . 7/26/2004
oh so god!i want more. i wanted to hit billy on the back of his head for saying bert's name. idiot! oh but i kinda like it. all innocent.
Cassiemoo chapter 12 . 7/24/2004
w00t. i loved the ending to chapter 12. ya know why? CAUSE THEY FINALLY KISS. yes. i love billy and quinn. i love them so much. i love you too, dahlin. i love this story.
hm.. yes. keep it up dahlin!
The Bloody Rose chapter 1 . 7/11/2004
This is a great story! I'm almost done with it, and i really love it! The characters are really believable! Keep up the good work!
Sam chapter 10 . 7/11/2004
I love it...UPDATE! please?
Spawn of Hell chapter 10 . 6/29/2004
That was god! and I do agree that 'Music is a savior; it really is the only thing that’s so real.' I admit i dont listen to the same kind of music but still is true(to each his own kind of music)... I dont know what i would do without it. theres all kind of music for all kind of people and moods. i felt that in your fic. i guess thats partly why i like it...
oh and cool penname too.
and you draw?(me too but im not that good at it.)
setokaba chapter 1 . 4/18/2004
great story, continue
FamousOneLiners chapter 10 . 4/17/2004
Love the chapter
and Thursday
and FATA
Germaine Amundsen chapter 9 . 3/7/2004
Ah-wah! Oh, I want more, please! I love it so much! I don't completely agree with the music, but the boys are all so cute and the writing is just so awesome! YAY!
peachesjo chapter 9 . 3/5/2004
WOW! im impressed! that is one really good story! Billy is a great charicter(sp?) and i like Quin. Im a little confused as to what went on in that last chapter in the end. but than again i will probibly find out more when the next chapter comes, which i hope wont be to terribly of a long wait! cheers!
scarface chapter 9 . 3/1/2004
Great story!
FamousOneLiners chapter 9 . 2/29/2004
Finally new chapter
It's more serious and very angsty here, I enjoyed it
next time
update sooner
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