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| Prisoner-11 chapter 11 . 4/18/2006
I forgot to put this in my chpt 12 review, in chpt 10 it says, "It did, God Billy your beautiful, I just… I’m not the one you want – I’m only going to hurt you.”
“No your not!” "
Okay, now I notice you do this a lot, you use your/you're wrong. 'Your' is a possesive term, and you're using it like 'you're'. 'You're' stands for 'you are' it's not possesive like your.
Ex: "This is your apple" and "You're (you are) great"So the above sentances should be: "...God Billy YOU'RE beautiful...I’m only going to hurt you.”
“No YOU'RE not!”
I really like this story by the way, otherwise I wouldn't be reviewing
| Prisoner-11 chapter 12 . 4/18/2006
| EmptyNight chapter 12 . 10/17/2004
| The Bloody Rose chapter 12 . 8/18/2004
OMG! I ADORE your story! Please keep going with it! It is one of the best ones i've ever read! You write beautifully! Keep up with the good work!
| Spawn of Hell chapter 12 . 7/26/2004
oh so god!i want more. i wanted to hit billy on the back of his head for saying bert's name. idiot! oh but i kinda like it. all innocent.
| Cassiemoo chapter 12 . 7/24/2004
w00t. i loved the ending to chapter 12. ya know why? CAUSE THEY FINALLY KISS. yes. i love billy and quinn. i love them so much. i love you too, dahlin. i love this story.
hm.. yes. keep it up dahlin!
| The Bloody Rose chapter 1 . 7/11/2004
This is a great story! I'm almost done with it, and i really love it! The characters are really believable! Keep up the good work!
| Sam chapter 10 . 7/11/2004
I love it...UPDATE! please?
| Spawn of Hell chapter 10 . 6/29/2004
That was god! and I do agree that 'Music is a savior; it really is the only thing that’s so real.' I admit i dont listen to the same kind of music but still is true(to each his own kind of music)... I dont know what i would do without it. theres all kind of music for all kind of people and moods. i felt that in your fic. i guess thats partly why i like it...
oh and cool penname too.
and you draw?(me too but im not that good at it.)
| setokaba chapter 1 . 4/18/2004
great story, continue
| FamousOneLiners chapter 10 . 4/17/2004
Love the chapter
| Germaine Amundsen chapter 9 . 3/7/2004
Ah-wah! Oh, I want more, please! I love it so much! I don't completely agree with the music, but the boys are all so cute and the writing is just so awesome! YAY!
| peachesjo chapter 9 . 3/5/2004
WOW! im impressed! that is one really good story! Billy is a great charicter(sp?) and i like Quin. Im a little confused as to what went on in that last chapter in the end. but than again i will probibly find out more when the next chapter comes, which i hope wont be to terribly of a long wait! cheers!
| scarface chapter 9 . 3/1/2004
| FamousOneLiners chapter 9 . 2/29/2004
Finally new chapter
It's more serious and very angsty here, I enjoyed it