Reviews for Live Fast
staying-anon chapter 1 . 11/2/2003
thank you, i was planning on doing that but was too lazy until now lol :o)
GuinevereKoopa chapter 1 . 11/1/2003
This was actually a really good story, but it could benefit from some paragraph breaks. I never would have read it if I hadn't read your other two stories first (which made me desperate for more of your spiffy writing.) Try re-ULing it after you fix the formatting and maybe you'll get a few more people to read it ;D