Reviews for Rotten Crisp
Moroni's Daughter chapter 1 . 12/17/2004
You're right. I didn't get it. But it sorta makes sense...sorta.
Desert Roses chapter 1 . 10/21/2004
I understood this really quite well! dont know what u mean that no one would get this, and man... is it powerful! PLZ keep writing! Au revoir!
Jinenji chapter 1 . 4/7/2004
i like this it's great! and belive me i get it!
Whipstickagostop chapter 1 . 1/16/2004
So simple. So beautiful. I luv it. Rotten!
The Mighty Dustmite chapter 1 . 7/20/2003
OOh...HAHAHAHAHA! Death to the traitor! :P
tinybuterfly chapter 1 . 7/7/2003
I think i understand it but who knows!

read some of my stuff you might like it!
Psycho-kyugurl chapter 1 . 7/3/2003
Et Tu Brute chapter 1 . 6/30/2003
*raises eyebrows* did it get colder in here or is it just me? hehe, i can feel the anger, and people suck in general so get used to it lol
charolastra chapter 1 . 6/30/2003
Well.. Have to admit that, just like the other reviewer, I don't at all understand the second-to-last line. But I DO understand the emotion behind it. I like it; I really do.. it's got a nice flow to it, with the repetition of "..You are" and then breaking that repetition at the end with an abrubt "Die." (Nice touch! Haven't we all felt that way 'bout someone.. an ex, crap boss, or whoever.)

Good job, really enjoyed it.
Cianna Greenwood chapter 1 . 6/29/2003
Nope. No comprehension of the second to last line. I think that's either something that's a personal thing, or something you've gotten from a very obscure and rarely read story / book. Keep writing. You may have potential.