|Reviews for Tabulated Reality|
| Just Wolf chapter 1 . 7/1/2003
i loved all the metaphors. the moon was such a good way to put it. "My ribbon's untied"...great line, so sensual and powerful and tempting. that was a n amazing poem, far too poetic to be called a story
| Angerona chapter 1 . 6/30/2003
This was wonderfuly, amazing, imaginative. One of the best things i have seen all week aday and let me tell you i read alot of poems in aday.
I love the part about moom and the night. Amazing, really great the personifactaion of everything gives it this...life that it wouldn;t have other wise. again really great work. :D
~Angerona the Goddess of Death~
P.S Only when we start looking back will we start walking into walls.