i emailed you sumtin, so can u read it?

Okay, I just finished the story and um, It's good, it's good, it's good! Um, the NaomixBrett was a weird match if you ask me (which u never) and at least you remembered that I rejected AAron, and wasn't just magically going out with him all of a sudden. Great story, hurry up and write the next one!
)Love ya, Shannon

Hey Erin!
This was just such a GREAT story... it's beyond words! :) I can't wait for the next one!
You love us to bits? I dunno if that was just in the story but... if it was true... (:P) I love ya too! I agree... who could wish for more better friends? I'm so lucky to have you as a friend, Erin. Thank you so much! :) You're always there for me... even if that does sound tacky!
Love ya lots,
~Mahogga~ xx

Ha ha, awesome! :P A PARTY! :D
Umm, well... great chapters, Erin!
Put more up soon! :)
Luv, Mahogga ;)

Aww, how sweet and sad! *lmao* Uh... yay! You put chapters up! :D
The story is nearly finished, ne? Damn it!
Keep writing well,
luv, ~Naomi~ x

Ahh, funny! Yay, we found the hotel! Finally!
Put the final chappies up soon! :)
Luv, Mahogga xx

Kool chappie. Yum, steak and veggies! :D
Luv ya,
~Ma...hogga~

lol that's great! and guess wat? I JUST REVIEWED ALL YOUR STORIES AND POEMS! GO ME!
Lotta Luv,
Darion

I FELL ON TOP OF HIM? *LMAO* Kool... ;)
Put more chappies up soon! :)
~Mahogga~

Ahh, kool! Yay! Finally chapters... yay! STILL MORE! :D Well... one more. Ahh, funny... m Brett! :P
Umm, DOG KENNELS! :D
Luv, Mahogga ;)

Yay! Brett! :D Oh... damn... I'm me again! *lol* Oh well... WE'RE ALL GONNA DIE! :O
Luv, Mahogga ;)

Interesting also. Well, this one has more of a point than the first chapter, I think. When will it become an adventure though? I suppoe that you are using the first two chapters to introduce the characters. I usually use about five to seven! Well, at least it is developing:)

Intresting! Quite odd, if I do say so myself. You have a bit of talent for this sort of thing, but I must say that the bad grammar made it difficult to read at points. Just work on that, and it will be perfect! A disclaimer may be useful too. I like to use them to tell people not to steal my characters. I also liked that you put yourself in the story. I do that often, but they are always WAY too insane for this site. Well, pretty much work on grammar, ok?

"Vnomi" is NOT the only one who reads ur story! I do! YES IM READING (well just finished reading) IT NOW!
And also when u say about Matt I laughed. I forgot about that... lol
) Love Ya, Shannon

This was the funniest chapter ever! JARROD! *lmao* What did you find? Please put another chappie up soon! I want a Barbie? *lmao*
cya!
luv, mahogga