Reviews for Fate
kcididfnord chapter 1 . 7/28/2003
I love this poem ... I've always wondered about fate, and this illustrates it wonderfully. Especially the first two lines, "end the beginning and begin the end, the future's already gone". Beautiful. Only one suggestion - if you change "time won't turn back, we've got to carry on" into "time won't turn back, we MUST carry on" - I think it makes the rhyme flow better. But that's only my opinion. Keep writing! _
Melanie Rose chapter 1 . 7/2/2003
This is very deep and very true. It's a wonderful poem.