lebuffle chapter 1 . 11/12/2003
Yes, it's definitely dramatic!
joie 610 chapter 1 . 8/3/2003
interesting! the beginning was cool :) i think maybe if it was longer and you described more of what happens/happened, it would be really cool. anyway, good work!
Anich chapter 1 . 7/12/2003
Damaged chapter 1 . 7/5/2003
This was definitely awesome. I loved it. "Oh the pain I felt, I saw the guilty walk free" That was way powerful. Keepw writing!

Emma Seamus chapter 1 . 7/3/2003
I love stories and poems that people write from a point of view that seems to be totally alien to them...these type of people are probably the best writers. I definitely put you in that category!
Falling Stars chapter 1 . 7/2/2003
This is really good! Your really good at poems!
Arayuldawen chapter 1 . 7/2/2003
this is good, i like it.

lainxauber chapter 1 . 7/2/2003
I like this...alot. I've often thought of this, being accused of a murder I didn't commit. What an unbelievably awful situation...
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 7/2/2003
It does have a dramatic quality to it. Nice work!

~Heart of the Sword