dude your song is great

i feel the same way about alot of you opinions keep up the good work

Whoa- Good!.. Very meaningful.. Sorry about puttin off reviewin, I was busy the first time I read it..

Powerful piece- with the truth well put foward.. I liked the flow and the sort of rhythmic tempo to this poem..

The chorus is great as well as the lines in italics.. I dont know, I just loved this poem a lot.. Its really good and basically it brings a good message across..

Hope you'll see some of my work.. Because I'll really like your opinion on them.. This is a great piece.. Enjoyed it muchly.. Write more.. Its goin on my favs.. )