Reviews for Real
R-Vega-X chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
The lines "Is is true that dreams are real? Feeling what we cannot feel?" are incredible. I also like the way you made it, I was always a fan of repetition poetry, but people are so quite to critisize it.
Et Tu Brute chapter 1 . 7/8/2003
muchly enjoyed :-D, good choice of words/wording it really pulled everything together
Imoen chapter 1 . 7/2/2003
I LIKED this. I loved the way you worded things, this was very beautifly written.
Hinkle chapter 1 . 7/2/2003
Very nice poem. I like the repeated lines, but I think they should be repeated a little less often. Other than that, though, it's a wonderful poem. I like the mental image it gives me... Even though I'm not quite sure what that mental image is. ... I'm afraid I'm not making much sense. Nice poem.