i really enjoy this story. it is unique and really captivating, although it can sometimes get confusing. i strongly urge you to continue with this wonderful piece of work. it is really good :)

Wow, this is the craziest thing in the world. I'm blown away by how I keep thinking this is about to end, and then bam, something else awful goes on. It moves so fast, the action is non-stop. Aesome!

Yay, another great chapter! I'm surprised that you got it up so fast. How long have you been working on it, I wonder?
Wonderfully, magnificent job!

Hello! Just here to say that I've been diligently reading your story for the past three or four days now, and believe me when I say that I'm absolutely in love with it. I really like the story line, its so unique and it got me hooked right away.
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I love the long chapters and the characters, they are so great and different from each other! Wonderful job! Seriously, the fact that you could write something as intense and as complex as this is amazing. I can't wait for you to update again.
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You really should have gotten more reviews than this. This is such a great story! I'm really at a loss as to who I trust in this. I mean, my brain is like...who are the good guys here? The bad guys? I feel like Nocturne did there for a while. (By the way, love the name Nocturne, very original)
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Well, anyhow, great story, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! And just so you know, I'm putting this story on my Favs and so are you!

Man, this is intense. I'm glad Nocturne is starting to quit being a crying little robot about all this. How was Kayli planning on getting her heart anyway? It's not like there's a button you press and a little door swings open...
Keep writing! This is so great!

About friggin' time Nocturne did something. Lol, this is excellent work. Can't wait to see how it ends.

ooh, spooky scary! Lucifer's always fouling everything up. But I guess that's always been the point, hasn't it?
Post soon! Terrible suspense!

Awesome chapter! Keep up the good work and update soon, please!

Great description in the first few paragraphs of the winter scene. The only thing I'm still a little confused about is which demon Nocturne was with, if Cassidy is the one that rose I thought that meant he was the one who had taken some angel-like qualities into himself, but maybe I just missed it since in this chapter it says Amethyst. Oops, I missed a clue. :(
I love this story.

It's very creative and goes completely beyond the Romeo/Juliet-esque cliche of a forbidden love between an angel and demon. Keep up the good work!

This just gets better and better. Just when I think I know what's coming, it all goes nuts again. I love it!

It's great to read a story where dialogue is used with some detailed descriptions-sometimes I feel like the only person who likes using dialogue to get a point across! I love this story, it's very unique and intriguing. Everything's happening very quickly but it doesn't feel rushed at all. Also a rare bonus to the reader. I love it!

keep going and tank you for updating. me so happy *BIG smile*

Ohmygoodness, your prologue was so beautiful and there's nothing BETTER than a gripping prologue. All the things that Nocturne says of earth is true, so true, and the way that you put it was so . . . I don'tknow, extraordinary, simply extraordinary.
I really like your writing style and your diction is so eloquent. I am put to shame, but I will continue onto the next chapter because you caught my attention with your description and propelled me into intrigue with your prologue.
Excellent job.
Love and farewell from the darkness,
~SHAMARA AMBROSE~

This really just keeps getting better and better! And it looks like the hybird has a good and bad side to it. Is it possible?
The story is still one of the best ones I've read!
~Katherine