Reviews for My Darling Nocturne |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder what all happened. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice I can't wait to see more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() heh heh...Cassidy can be funny. bad...but funny. poor Zeke...i used to bite my brother...but that was back when, you know, i didnt really have teeth...thats beyond the point. im so interested to see where this story is gonna go to. and its 'bout time you reveal some secrets...naw, you did it in good time. any earlier just woulda made me happy, probably notta been so great for the story, kudos ~color outside the lines~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story! I like all the characters, though Cassidy and Zeke are prolly my favorites. The plot line is interesting too. And your descriptions are nice. Keep writing! |
![]() ![]() great story as usual. keep going. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job keep writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() you have some good one-liners in here. like the part when Cassidy is like "Just sometimes...?" that was a good one. and then the playing in traffic. heehee, yay! this keeps getting more and more interesting (muffin) and more and more fun to read (midriff shirts...) good times. i really like Zeke (the name and the char) he's cool. and i like ur main, Nocturne also. which is a big deal for me because i never like mains. so this is mondo headline news here that ur making. continue on *adds to favorites* (why didnt i do that earlier? i have no idea...hum...) |
![]() ![]() loved it. please write for. i was getting drawn in and i'm on hte edge of my seat waiting for the ending. |
![]() ![]() ![]() O. . .very interesting. I like it a lot. You can a lot of places with it. Keep up the good work XD. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was great! its an interesting story with a bunch of good detail. im liking both the main charz so far. this was very fun to read and i bet it was fun to write. a good idea on the topic as well ~color outside the lines~ ps if u get bored, i would appriciate it so much if u reviewed my story Storm of Dreams. that would be just swell. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good chap update soon! and the plot thickens |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this version way better. good work update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() O, the last line kind of gave me chills, but in a good way. I like your writing style, and definetley want to read more, so write more! I'll be looking foward to it. -Raven |