|Reviews for I Can't Always|
| Sarah-Angel87 chapter 1 . 9/1/2003
I love this song/poem. I can understand the feeling the love only last a short time and is soon replaced by pain. you express yourself very well. good job!
| KayWest chapter 1 . 8/13/2003
Not very good? It's fabulous! I would also love to hear the tune, if that's possible in any way. Like I've said before, you writing is great! You are now on my favorite authors.
| Lidless Eye chapter 1 . 8/6/2003
Seems like a well-written song! ) Good work.
| VampiricSacrifice chapter 1 . 8/3/2003
i love this song so much. i love all your stuff. it all flows well even if it doesnt rhyme. really good!
| Plato's Optic Runaway chapter 1 . 7/13/2003
i love the line Lying to tell the truth...it just sticks in my head. this would make a great song! for some reason i'm thinking guitar..piano maybe. i suck at music. don't ask me. great job.
| suicidel angel chapter 1 . 7/10/2003
i'm terrible with music so i won't bother even trying, but on it's on it's fantastic, most of your work is (i won't say all coz i haven't read all of it)
| Angerona chapter 1 . 7/6/2003
I really like it, and i find that writers opinions mean little to nothing about the actual work. IT really is great i even had my own little tune for it and everything. I found it was kinda...clique not in a bad way in a good, kinda hey i have herd this somewere before. Which is a good thing don;t get me wrong i just think with your talent you can do much better than this.
~Angerona the Goddess of Death~
Solitude would be ideal if you could pick the people to avoid.
| Sunflower Philosophy chapter 1 . 7/5/2003
First of all, love the poem/song/thing, I understand exactly what you mean... and the thing is, sometimes you have to hide who you are as a good thing, to protect others, not just yourself. There are many different kinds of masks we wear.
Why do you prefer negative poetry- do you find more truth in it, or can you understand it better? I never used to able to write happy poetry, but now I can hardly write anything else.
Back to our subject. I loved this song, and I said, can really understand what you mean.
m~* Sunflower, anyone?
| Damaged chapter 1 . 7/4/2003
Very deep. I relate to this...
| not sure yet chapter 1 . 7/4/2003
interesting, good flow it and i think its pretty good, it sat very well in my mind, so muchly enjoyed this, excellent job
| Imoen chapter 1 . 7/3/2003
This is an incredible peice of work. I'd really love to hear the music for this if you have any in mind. Very deeply and beautifly written.
| Random someone chapter 1 . 7/3/2003
I loved this piece. Great lyrics, wonderful expression. Keep it up and I might come back to read more.
| Faythe chapter 1 . 7/3/2003
Hey, thanks for reviewing my lyrics, it's really appreciated.
I'm glad I come onto this page too, these lyrics are really good. The lines "I'm just a runaway / Another coward / Who's too afraid to fall" are amazing. I dunno, there's just something that really sticks out about them. I'll have to go and find some more of your work and hopefully give another review better than this one ;)
Keep writing too, I can't believe you're only 14, you put across your talent so well already!
| Shelila chapter 1 . 7/3/2003
It's a really good song, I really like it. I would like to habe your opinion on some of my songs if you have the time to review them!