Reviews for Walking Past Me
elvenstorm chapter 1 . 2/2/2004
Good poem! Like the repetition of as you walk... Something so many people go through and you've captured it well. Good job
flowerthief chapter 1 . 1/1/2004
I like this. The repitition is nice and I like the last line. Thanks for reviewing mine.
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AC
Larry chapter 1 . 12/23/2003
Great poem...i believe everyone has felt like that at one time
Deadwind chapter 1 . 12/11/2003
:sighs: That's always the way it goes, eh? Another great job!
Anthony Draconius chapter 1 . 10/28/2003
I have never read a better way of expressing those feelings. Keep up your amazing work.
Goddess' Phoenix chapter 1 . 10/27/2003
aw that's so awesome but sad and true. it's really great. you rock!
SpawnMeister666 chapter 1 . 10/2/2003
Nicely structured and worded. The pain of being ignored comes across really well. Great stuff.

Spawny
swift sky silver chapter 1 . 7/4/2003
sigh, you describe the feeling so well0)
moment2moment chapter 1 . 7/3/2003
Seras, you have hit hte core of my life. Last year, that was me. Thnaks for putting into words what i obviously couldn't. Oh btw, you have talent.

Love always,

Arashi
Fresh Failure chapter 1 . 7/3/2003
Crushes are just crushes.. butterflies in the stomach. It hurts when they don't know what you feel, yet it's somewhat relieving. But don't worry, it's just a crush. I like it.
Kunoichi'sFate chapter 1 . 7/3/2003
wow, this is short but beautiful...great job. Keep up the good work!
endless040 chapter 1 . 7/3/2003
Awesome poem. Brilliant format. Well written. Love it! Good job