Reviews for 2 Hearts |
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chrissysam chapter 32 . 10/22/2013 This was wonderful! |
Hidden Flowers chapter 32 . 11/19/2009 Sweet! I was just about to whine about your killing Valerine. He was my second favorite. My first favorite was Snake. A nasty fellow, but for some reason, I think tat if he were real I would be fond of him. I tend to adopt as brothers or whatever, and I think i would do that to him. I'm rambling. Sorry about that... |
Everlasting Dreams chapter 7 . 6/11/2009 AHAHAHAHHA! The ending was so funnay! ;] |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/13/2009 Ahahaha me again. just finished reading one love. Ah it made me cry like hell but it was really really good. Hey how come it's not on fictionpress? Pls post it here coz it was seriosuly one of the best iv read. And I just reread some parts of this again ( the end) and seriously laughed like crazy at the pprposal part. And the epilogue compelty tore my heart out and smashed it but it was a good ending. I'm actually starting to like rine as much as rane if not more. Ah it was so sad to see him not remember anyone especially rane. They're ment to be forever together like best friends should be |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/12/2009 Hey I read this on soompi. Ah just leaving a comment coz I thought this story was pretty awsome . so glad everything turned out the way it did even though valerine lost his memory but I guess that's for the best. But still it sux seeing the two vals seperated. Is there a sequal? Like on lukis or valerine or am I not looking hard enough? . ah but I like this fic so now I'm gona go stalk your other fics . |
superficialSagacity chapter 1 . 2/19/2009 So where ARE your other works? Are you not keeping them anymore? I liked the other stories as well.. D: |
chouchou chapter 32 . 8/13/2008 Awesome ending. I kind of expected something like that from Mrs. kuyume because she was being suspicious in the last chapter. |
chouchou chapter 1 . 8/13/2008 I'm so glad you ended up finishing this! I love this out of your old works and I really admire the fact that you kept with this. |
E.M Costello chapter 32 . 7/7/2008 wow the ending really surprised me and if there was a sequel i would definitly read it. |
Donna So chapter 32 . 6/23/2008 I have to say this is my favorite story! the best that i love! |
love addict chapter 32 . 1/18/2008 Aw, I am so happy that Valerine is alive, :)) Haha. I LOVE HIM :)) much, so much :)) wait, i just have one question.. whenever i click your site, it doesnt appear :( I really want to see their images, i just got to :)) Haha. :)) Godspeed, Love you :)) |
prettiySMILE chapter 2 . 1/14/2008 hello Yisa ~ I've read Maid's Love and I'm currently reading this story. (chapter 25?) Anyways, I'd like to point out something that you probably did on purpose but I'd like to mention it anyway, you can't exactly write any of the main character's name in Japanese. I think you can write V in Japanese but I was pretty confused. It annoyed me .. in a way. Anyhow, another thing I'd like to point out is your Japanese .. needs a bit of practicing don't you think? Apart from those things, great story. I AM leaning over towards the Valerane (which would be pronounced Va-le-ra-ne, ne?) and Mint pairing. Although...he's way too...cliched ? As a character, I mean. Good looking bad boy with brains and a sporty body. Also, he's in a broken family and so he falls in love with a girl who is pretty much the opposite (excpet for some things) .. Maybe, its just me though. Try different sorts of characters but don't go crazy like make the protagonist of the story fall in love with someone who looks like a clown. That's just..eww. LOLS. _;; . Anyways, I hope you take this review well. Its a nice story so far. prettiySMILE |
claireponcherrii chapter 1 . 1/4/2008 triangle~! |
Keenon chapter 32 . 1/2/2008 awesome story, I just nominated it for skow awards (skow. if you don't know it)and I hope you make it through to the finals! |
xxscribblesx chapter 32 . 6/13/2007 this story is one of the best! it ws truly addicting! |