Reviews for Trust
Isarandel chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
nice poem. rhymes too. _
Identity chapter 1 . 2/15/2004
very morbid and very well written. i like the imagry. i'll be checking back.
DefianceIsMe chapter 1 . 7/3/2003
Your use of imagery evokes scenes that are almost tangible. It's really wonderful. I congratulate you on a great piece. _
PlayMateMisfit chapter 1 . 7/3/2003
wow, this isn't 1/2 bad. not at all. i normally don't like things that ryma, but this is very well done - keep thoughts on paper

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Resurgam chapter 1 . 7/3/2003
Wow, that's really good. I like your way of words. I love how you put the whole scheme of death together too. Nice job.
Et Tu Brute chapter 1 . 7/3/2003
wow that was superb, so *shivers* ugh damn my lack of colorful phrases! i think im in love