Reviews for Peach
Kelpylion chapter 1 . 2/6/2004
unusual but perfect metaphors and imagery to fit this idea. Deliciously bitter.
ittybittytreefrog chapter 1 . 7/24/2003
Wow is the only word I can think of to express this. Very powerful poem. Your use of imagery is amazing.
Miamouse chapter 1 . 7/10/2003
lovely. no criticsm applicable. Just... lovely.

Mia :)
broken shard of twilight chapter 1 . 7/8/2003
Ahh, amazing. Insightful, deep. I love the comparison, with the peach. Your ending line was completely brilliant. I love it.

Twilight and Laughter,

Kelly
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 7/4/2003
Wow! Each word was perfect, and you chose things that were completely original. I loved this.

Heart of the Sword
A Weaver of Words chapter 1 . 7/3/2003
wow! those are powerful words. Great poem! reminds me of my poem the Apple
Mandrake-CoRn chapter 1 . 7/3/2003
Oh wow, it's so original and so sad. Really interestingly put. GOOd job :)