Reviews for Wind
Lounalune chapter 1 . 7/23/2004
That's so beautiful!
LadyAnesta chapter 1 . 10/2/2003
very nice :)
Nonki chapter 1 . 7/18/2003
Good! _
CoolBeans18s chapter 1 . 7/10/2003
The syllables were a little off, but I loved it! Short & sweet!

~ CoolBeans18s
Bibliomania chapter 1 . 7/9/2003
Is there an undertone?
Talon Tearine chapter 1 . 7/6/2003
Short and so sweet! -
Psycho-kyugurl chapter 1 . 7/5/2003
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 7/4/2003

~Heart of the Sword
Transparent Eyes chapter 1 . 7/4/2003
Usually I wouldn't review something like this but you had your little "r/r" posted so I thought I would take a stab at it. I had to read this poem over to get some meaning out of it. It's probably just me, but poems this short are void of any substanial meaning. I see the wind could stand for trouble in your life but it doesn't harden you heart...but it just ends, like BAM, and I was left thinking, what just happened?
little6wolf chapter 1 . 7/4/2003

nice! But, not to be offensive but, gently has 2 syllables! So you would need one more word on the second line!

But, it was still good.

Keep up the good work!