Not bad, it is not really my of my tastes but it wasn't bad

god sry but in my opinion it was awesome but sorta boring SRY!

Ah! I'm going to cry! This is beautiful! Sad, but beautiful! You're amazing! I wish I could rhyme like you do! Wow. This is.. oh..man wow! Wow. You're an amazing poet! Oh, man.. wow. This is so..oh..gosh, wow! I wish I could write like this! WOW! :O

I liked it. It was okay, AND IT RYHMED! I cant do that most of the time. *sniff* Im jealous

Can someone PLEASE write a poem that doesn't suck?

Aww... very sad . Sniffles.. all of your poems are sad.. I just realized that.. I miss you so much! Well keep up the good work!

yes, i did like this. the rhyme scheme made the emotions even more effective. keep writing0)

_ Very nice. I like your writing style. It's simple and your rhyme is excellent.

*Clarie*

Hope you like it! Enjoy yourself!

Happy Reading,

Pure Dove