Reviews for Holograph
FiberglassButterfly chapter 1 . 1/4/2004
completly wonderful...i especially like the lines:
'i saw you first in shades
of black and gray with subtle splash'
awesome.
Naja Copperleaf chapter 1 . 11/15/2003
Perfect.
The Teaspoon Faery chapter 1 . 7/26/2003
This is an awesome, awesome poem. It is amazing. So haunting, chilling, subtle...I can't find the word but it is beautiful. I wouldn't change it at all. I love your poetry, keep it up!
Magpie Poet chapter 1 . 7/24/2003
enchanting, though i think i'd get rid of the 'you crumbled'line. like the splash of color at the begining.
ittybittytreefrog chapter 1 . 7/24/2003
Beautifully written poem. I know the feeling.
Lux's Confusion chapter 1 . 7/11/2003
if i may make a stupid suggestion here, don't reveal the fact that the figure crumbled till the last line, it sort of ruins the effect if you get my meaning. other than that it was beautiful, tragik and dare i say enlightening. how did you get inspiration for this one? wow.

if i may suggest one more thing, describe the figure more besides just the action of touching it. make the reader know exactly what it looks like, expression, posture, emotions, and so on.

this was beautiful, keep up the great work my dear.

Jasmine
soulspring chapter 1 . 7/8/2003
powerful...
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 7/5/2003
You never cease to amaze me.

Heart of the Sword