Reviews for Close Up
liv-and-die too lazy to sign chapter 8 . 6/18/2007
Maria sighed. She was tired of being so moody those days. She desperately needed a break from all those stressful days she had been having. Her mum was torturing her with annoying lectures about how to study better and giving her studying books

in the first chapter you talked about how Maria and Mike were alike because her mum was dead.
persephone chapter 18 . 2/18/2006
ok! some things I didn't get... first her mother was dead... then alive... then she didn't have a car... then suddenly she did... first she lived with her father then no mention of the father... and wasn't Mitch supposed to have a car? whatever... This needs some editing, other than that it's a typical and somewhat clichè story... nice non the less but you need to wach out for continuity and coherence in the story... You also have some spelling issues, not too bad but they're still there.
RoyalRose chapter 18 . 3/30/2005
That was such a good story
ana rita chapter 18 . 11/22/2003
so beautiful! so cute, so romantic,, buahh,, i want more!,, congrat!
FamousOneLiners chapter 18 . 8/17/2003
sweet ending!
sweetflower chapter 18 . 8/17/2003
truly a beautiful story :)
MG chapter 6 . 8/16/2003
This is a really good story, but i ask of you...PLZ majke the chapters longer. this is a gr8 story but im a chapter kind of person!
attemptingwriter chapter 18 . 8/16/2003
i loved it! i loved it i loved it! great story
Kenya Bloodstone chapter 18 . 8/16/2003
Hey this was a wonderful ending to an excellent story. I ABSOLUTLY Love this story.
Kenya Bloodstone chapter 17 . 8/13/2003
I love this chapter. It is so sweet how Mitch went in there to defend Maria's honor. Okay I am a hopeless romantic and that was just so sweet.:)
sweetflower chapter 16 . 8/13/2003
nice story...hope u update soon :)

*fatima? interesting
Kenya Bloodstone chapter 16 . 8/11/2003
Sorry about not being logged in my internet is being mean. I really like this chapter... Uh oh I hope Maria doesnt get into to much trouble.
ChickenNoodles lazy like usual chapter 15 . 8/11/2003
Dang,you update so fast, lol. Thats a good thing though.

Great chapter, update soon!
Kenya Bloodstone chapter 15 . 8/10/2003
aww sweet kiss lol I cant wait for the other chapters
ChickenNoodles lazy chapter 14 . 8/5/2003
I loved it...but I would love it more if Mitch/Maria got together soon...heh.

Well, update soon..(I didn't leave a long review this time...lol)
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