Reviews for The Perfect Crime
aspenjerome chapter 1 . 7/5/2003
Simple, and clever.

But lay off the big vocab and adjectives. You gotta know how to use em, and space em out, before you start throwing around "lassitude" and "ameliorate."

When you use big words to describe simple things, like a political speech, you lose people on the words and drop the tension.

As always, I invite you read and review my work in kind.