Wow, I didn't know you could write like that...all angsty and descriptive. Great job, good choice of words.

*clicks on "add story to favorites"*

Hm...

Can I take a wild stab at what this might be about? Who, I mean? Talk to you later. Durnit, you just went offline. Okay.

Yeah, Amanda, it is angsty, but so fucking what? (Excuse my Latin.) It's good. Amazing. Great description. Awesome. I like this story a lot.

And who did you not want to feel bad? Oh, well. Fantastic job.

Mann...

I think Angst writing is the best. I really like this, good job girl...

And if you must know, I just remembered my password so phbt pageboy! hehe

Anyway, good job writing this, can't wait for more

You're not any kind of sicko - these are perfectly normal emotions emanating perfectly normal anger. Don't let any weak-of-heart pretty pansy convince you differently. Deep thinkers aren't evil; they're inspired.

I think what you've written has a haunting beauty to it. Sad, yes, but beautifully sad. And for that, good job. I wish it were longer; I'd like to know more about why "he loves me not." You have those reasons inside you, so tell us.

And, really, you're too talented a writer to have "blingbling" as your handle.

As always, I invite you to read and review my work in kind.