Reviews for July
E. Gao chapter 1 . 7/8/2003
it has a fantastical veneer to it that makes it so enjoyable to read. meaning...please keep it!

love the key motif, and the dialogue...geez. it just fits together so well. all the transitions and the descriptions...[dies]

~EG
Karbon Okapi chapter 1 . 7/6/2003
Don't know whether to keep this one or not? You gotta be kidding me! It's awesome! I love the first two large stanzas, and the thread that runs through the poem. Beautiful.
Sunflower Philosophy chapter 1 . 7/6/2003
I can't even begin to describe my awe. I absolutely love your metaphors and adjectives and words you put together, like "fountainscape" and "monkeyshines". The flow is so natural, like a wisp of thought freshly drifted out of your mind... I felt a great stir of emotion when you finished the whisper... "Love". It was so perfect, so hopeful...

I completely, utterly, totally love this poem.

m~* Sunflower, anyone?