Reviews for Pain
krisitn chapter 1 . 5/17/2005
hey!so u are kristy's brother jacob?i'm one of her friends from school.i love ur 's REALLY good!
sleah chapter 1 . 9/30/2003
Hey! This is me...anyway. I love this poem, glad you told me to makes me wonder... *sigh* nevermind, I shalln't let my mind

~ Yabou ~ SL
Shalott13 chapter 1 . 7/17/2003
Extremely powerful. The rhyme was practical and didn't hinder the poem at all, and the ending was a sharp stab to my stomach. Excellent work.
Remm Farr chapter 1 . 7/12/2003
Pretty powerful. Good all around! I liked the portrayal of emotions.

CASSIEgrl32 chapter 1 . 7/12/2003
wonderful poem. it brought tears to my eyes.
Mae chapter 1 . 7/12/2003
I could clearly feel your pain in this poem. Very graphic descriptions.
eliza chapter 1 . 7/10/2003
i loved it it was powerful and it captured me the ending was bittersweet.
Sam chapter 1 . 7/9/2003
Hey I really liked this poem it was awesome. So I was just wondering is this how you really feel about Jeff? So ttyl buh bye!
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 7/7/2003
This was really powerful.

~Heart of the Sword
Keeper of the Key chapter 1 . 7/6/2003
Wow, nice job! Good job on the rhyming.
SpilledInk chapter 1 . 7/6/2003
Wow. You captured the emotions so well and then end was so unexpected. Luved it. Great job!


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